Commission for Scarlet-Wings-Kaili finished

Finished commission for my dear friend from Canada  
Kelly I would like to thank you for helping me out, and I need to apologise for my slow work on this commission. I don't plan to use excuses, but you already know yourself how school can be tiering. 
Anyway I am glad that I finished this commission for you and I will be happy to hear your oppinion on it; how do you like it?
And for my watchers feel free to comment and criticise me